A short but thick reddish plate in a cave
moves towards the front and the back
from winds from the hole of the cave
makes sounds resembling talks
The short plate which was extraordinary short
made a 's' sound as 'th'
christmas as chrithtmas
cosmos as cothmoth
sixsence as thixthence
but the plate was fast and strong
specializing itself to sound of 'th'
making itself attractive as sound of song
sound of wind coming out deep from the cave
sounds as language by the short but thick reddish plate
This is a very poem with great use of humour. My only real issue with this is in lack of punctuation. This leads the meaning to run from one line to another with the reader being unsure of where one idea ends and the next one starts. You have though met the requirements of this assignment with particular verve, so well done.
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